I started with a sepia India ink underpainting with a colorful watercolor underpainting laid on top. Then I added pastel and hit a wall harder than a crash dummy!
Several wise artist friends kindly said, "When a painting is not working, it is usually a composition problem." So I set it aside and took another look at it several months later. Being a wee bit stubborn and loving the feel of this scene, I scrubbed off the pastel and started again.
Luckily, adding the tall grass, flowers and a dramatic sky did the trick! Sometimes, stubbornness pays off!